Try to omit ‘that’ in unnecessary places in your story for ease of reading.
E.g: He slapped her across the face so hard that she reeled backward.
Omit unnecessary turn of phrases.
For example:
He shrugged his shoulder
He blinked his eyes
She clapped her hands
Happy to be back again
Amir.h.ghazi
World of Horror 
Great tips, I think I need to print this out and tape it to my computer monitor as a reminder! š Glad to see you back.
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Thank you, and glad you like it.
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All these little things matter so much, thanks for sharing!
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You’re welcome lady
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Good tips and useful for my poetry challenge
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