Quick tips

Try to omit ‘that’ in unnecessary places in your story for ease of reading.

E.g: He slapped her across the face so hard that she reeled backward.


Omit unnecessary turn of phrases.

For example:

He shrugged his shoulder

He blinked his eyes

She clapped her hands

Happy to be back again

Amir.h.ghazi

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